Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this? How to improve this problem?
In the modern life, individuals prefer living alone mostly, because of it, they stay own themselves without sharing with something with someone. In
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, anti-social manner is common and is accepted day by day. I will briefly explain Suggestion
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Many people stay the their circle which is comfort zone no bothering with anyone. They get over the issues alone, and after some time later they think it is not necessary to be in a social area. Linking Words
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to say, other people do not require for anything, happiness related to living lonely. Linking Words
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, that people can believe that others not well as themselves, so they can not be respectful anymore. Linking Words
For example
, in a village where is near the Ilgaz Mountain, almost all people are alone at home, they have not talked so much each other. Their treatment is getting worst, because of communication is a significant link to healthy life. There were some suicide in Linking Words
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village. Clearly, it can be a precaution to chit chat with a friend.
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, there are some reasons to increase asocial individuals. The most significant is The internet's overusing in order to escape reality. In order to communicate anyone on online is rather easy nowadays. Linking Words
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, the belief appears human is not important as like the old days, every single time on the internet can available to someone no matter who is. Admittedly, to escape from real area is relaxing sometimes, Linking Words
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it is not a solution. People should share their activity, particularly problems can be solved with a hand. Doubtless, the internet is really good option compared to people, but usually it can not solute matters.
In conclusion, I restate, the modern human prefers staying alone in order to run away the social problems. Linking Words
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, it is not suitable for the human relationship. To respect everybody and to communicate face to face is the most convenient to health life and society.Linking Words
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