the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps show
the
Islip's Correct article usage
apply
plans
for developing its centre in the future Use synonyms
by
the biggest change to be about creating a dual carriageway.
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with
Initially
, Islip Center now has Linking Words
shops
on both sides of the main streetUse synonyms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
plans
to build a shopping centre and Use synonyms
shops
along the northern and southern border of the walkway, respectively. The pedestrian area will be between Use synonyms
shops
and the new developments Use synonyms
such
as a bus station and car park which is very helpful for the community.
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According to
the development plan, the city is going to build a bus station on the west side of the Shopping Centre and a car park on its east side. Linking Words
Moreover
, a new housing development there are in the Linking Words
plans
, on the southern border of the Use synonyms
shops
Use synonyms
next
to the park and on the east side of the parking.
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Overall
, to complete the Linking Words
plans
they have to build in the countryside. All these developments will be within the dual carriageway which is very useful for the town to have all these close and with easy access.Use synonyms
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