the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps show
the
Islip's Correct article usage
apply
plans
for developing its centre in the future by
the biggest change to be about creating a dual carriageway.
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Initially
, Islip Center now has shops
on both sides of the main street,
but Remove the comma
apply
plans
to build a shopping centre and shops
along the northern and southern border of the walkway, respectively. The pedestrian area will be between shops
and the new developments such
as a bus station and car park which is very helpful for the community.
According to
the development plan, the city is going to build a bus station on the west side of the Shopping Centre and a car park on its east side. Moreover
, a new housing development there are in the plans
, on the southern border of the shops
next
to the park and on the east side of the parking.
Overall
, to complete the plans
they have to build in the countryside. All these developments will be within the dual carriageway which is very useful for the town to have all these close and with easy access.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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