the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The two maps show
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Islip's
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for developing its centre in the future
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the biggest change to be about creating a dual carriageway.
Initially
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, Islip Center now has
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on both sides of the main street
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but
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to build a shopping centre and
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along the northern and southern border of the walkway, respectively. The pedestrian area will be between
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and the new developments
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as a bus station and car park which is very helpful for the community.
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the development plan, the city is going to build a bus station on the west side of the Shopping Centre and a car park on its east side.
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, a new housing development there are in the
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, on the southern border of the
shops
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next
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to the park and on the east side of the parking.
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, to complete the
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they have to build in the countryside. All these developments will be within the dual carriageway which is very useful for the town to have all these close and with easy access.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plans, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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