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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Music
 is one of our life aspects that we found it the most interest.
Moreover
, it is well known that
music
 is a buoyant measure of taking people from different cultures and ages together. I have strongly advocated that I have a same view with regard to the statement that say
music
 is a good step to bring myriad citizens from different group.
To begin
 with,
music
Suggestion
the music
 has manifold genres that's always connected to each other,
for example
; Jazz and Pop, R&B and EDM.
In addition
, the young generation is more likely to keep in touch with Rock, R&B, and EDM genre.
On the other hand
, the older generation has more tendency to listen to Jazz, Blues, and Pop genre. The nowadays
music
 industry has already improved a lot since the beginning of the 21st century.
Therefore
, myriad kinds of
music
 genre can be mixed into one
song
, and numerous of different generations can gather up and listen to
this
 kind of
song
 together,
for instance
; Lemon by Kenshi Yonezu.
This
song
 is about Kenshi’s grandfather that had already passed away, the lyrics itself have a plethora of deep meaning and contain many lyrics that related to love.
Consequently
, an array of people finds
this
song suit
Suggestion
song to suit
 perfectly with their taste. The
next
,
music
 has a multitude beneficial thing for our body,
for example
; it can reduce our stress after working or even studying for almost 12 hours.
Moreover
, when we have a reunion event or even a party,
music
 will be our
first
 priority to be included in
such event because
Suggestion
such an event because
 it can make us feel relaxed and make our relationship stronger than before. In a nutshell,
music
 can bring people from different groups, so that they can become stronger.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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