In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.
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has
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family children
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family, children
have
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has
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both
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fulfill
their children’s needs. put in effect
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can not
share it because of can not
cannot
both
the parents are working.
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Furthermore
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their
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hear
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a child
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