Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles, aunts, and grandparents is better, rather than only by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that children should be nurtured just by nuclear families. Personally, I completely disagree with

this

view. In my opinion, it would be better extended family play a vital role in bringing up the children. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons which can aptly substantiate my viewpoint. On the one hand, I believe that there are three main reasons which prove to look after children independently and without the help of relatives is not a good choice.

Firstly

, nowadays both couples are busy and don’t have enough time to spend with their children and do not respond to what their children

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need and how they learn best.

Secondly

, in an early stage of children’s life, parents should spend a lot of money to hire a babysitter, and finding good ones who love, support and round-the-clock care children is a real challenge

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Finally

, children really need something to do in their spare time when their parents snowed under with work.

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, my friend and his wife both work in Distribution

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belongs to the state works 40-hours per week and their child feels lonely and impacts on

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

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By contrast

, in joint family structure children can find close relatives who fill their parents' absence, and children's upbringing becomes very easy as there are so many people to take care of the child.

Furthermore

, in the extended family, parents do not worry to take their children to trustworthy caretakers in which aunts, uncles and grandparents.

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the whole family, assist children to obtain invaluable life skills

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an illustration, grandparents usually have decades of experience to share with the younger generation. In conclusion, To put the whole matter in a nutshell, I totally agree with

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that in the extended family structure, children learn quantities of understanding, adjusting, & selflessness, And For working parents, it's a blessing to have reliable relatives for their children, and there are several reasons mentioned why

this

is the case.