In many western countries,there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children .what are the advantages and disadvantages of having no children?

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It has been
obsorved
discovered or determined by scientific observation
observed
in recent years that the number of family
memebers
one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
members
is decreasing. Some people believe that having children is a vital part of their relationship,
whilist
Suggestion
whilst
others believe it is a
borden
an onerous or difficult concern
burden
. I my opinion, I believe that the
benfits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
benefit
of not having children
outwigh
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighs
outweighed
the drawbacks.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial burden
  • professional advancement
  • lifestyle flexibility
  • environmental footprint
  • relationship dynamics
  • mentorship
  • population control
  • personal fulfillment
  • childcare responsibilities
  • community involvement
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