some people think that studying history offers no benefits, while others say it helps understand the present. discuss both views.
The
nesecessity
to discover the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
history
has come to the forefront of public awareness in the past years. Although
certain group
of people Suggestion
a certain group
believe
that knowing the past is Suggestion
believes
unvaluable
, I vehemently agree that it has an overwhelming positive impact in today’s modern world. In the succeeding paragraphs, I intend to delve into the rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my not available or accessible or at hand
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invaluable
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view point
.
Regarding those who hold that studying a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
history
is unnecessary, there is a slew of apparent reasons. One supportive claim is that the global competition in business and professional world is immensely fierced
to waste time dealing with the past. If people would continue tackling what produced by or subjected to forcing
forced
occures
behind the times, come to pass
occurs
then
the possibility of keeping themselves abreast to
the latest innovations is miniscule. Suggestion
of
Thus
, the majority of businessman and professional individuals such
as doctors opt to disregard history
and instead
they envolve
themselves preoccupied with the latest trends and discoveries.
connect closely and often incriminatingly
involve
involved
evolve
Nevertheless
, I firmly believe that history
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plays
on
our daily lives. The most overpowering reason stems from the fact that it is an effective Suggestion
in
tools
to hinder the Suggestion
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reoccurance
of negative events which happened decades ago. The study of an event that happens
occurrence
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the Edsa Revolution
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. If learners particularly
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learners, particularly
this
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event which involved corruption, very sad; especially involving grief or death or destruction
tragic
then
not only do they have the power to scrutinize and be stringent in choosing pilotical
leaders, but they involving or characteristic of politics or parties or politicians
political
also
can instill those knowledge which they acquired to the younger generations in order to create a more productive citizens
.
To sum up, Suggestion
citizen
i
maintain that refers to the speaker or writer
I
history
is vital to better understand today’s situations. Furtherdown
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students but
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students, but
also
out of school youths about the importance of the past.Submitted by jeffreymaralit021186 on
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