Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is certainly true that parents and teachers

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play

a crucial

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in

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development

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the development

of children.

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it is thought by some that parents ought to guide their children how to behave in society in an acceptable manner

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others

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hold

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opinino

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

school

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is responsible for teaching social values.In my opinion

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believe

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of both is important to teach them. On the one hand, some people believe that parents

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is imperative in

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development

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the development

of children as a responsible citizen due to

following factors

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the following factors

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, parents are

first

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chidcare

a service involving care for other people's children

childcare

provider and nobody knows

children temprament

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children, temperament

children temperament

children's temprament

children's children's temprament

better than parents. They can provide critical feedback anytime.

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Secondly

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they are responsible for building character traits and intellectual behaviour by telling them

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the importance

of

reletoionships

a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)

relationships

relationship

and others independence in our social

envoirnment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. It is

clear

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clearly

seen that children spend more time with parents are more sensible in social issues.

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, parents are more

responsibile

worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable

responsible

in

child progress

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a child's progress

child's progress

the child's progress

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social level

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a social level

the social level

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other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

thinks that schooling is responsible because students spend major part of their time in

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.It is noted that schools are very

successfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

in teaching a child about cooperation which are major virtue of life for sustaining in a society as a good citizen.

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, in

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school during

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school, during

team work they learn how to cooperate with others members of

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the team

a team

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automatically comes in their personality.

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Teachers are

scholors

a learned person (especially in the humanities); someone who by long study has gained mastery in one or more disciplines

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of them or themselves

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actions and real model for pupils.

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why, they listen to their teacher very carefully and try to implement their sayings.It is clear

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evidence

that

teacher's roles

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the teacher's roles

in

children

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child

child's

children's

development

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are

paramount. In my opinion,

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believe that child

development

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as a social being is a complex interplay of many factors which are inextricably linked to each others.Teachers and

parents

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parents'

role

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in developing mature social human

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is

equally important. With the efforts of

school

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and teachers a fully socially acceptable human can be created. In

concluson

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conclusions

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while different people have their own view

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however

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,

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that whether selecting teacher or parents is a daunting task because

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one

one's

role

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cannot be underestimated in comparison to

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the counterpart

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, both

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play

supplemental

role

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