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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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While
business
 help people
to earn
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earn
 a handful of money other than any employment,
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
responsibility
 towards the
society
 is never coming down. I believe,
more richer
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richer
 a person is,
bigger
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the bigger
 the
responsibility
one
 has. And
this
 essay shall discuss that in detail with relevant examples.
Firstly
,
one
 of the major reasons why
business
 should have a
responsibility
 towards the
society
 is because of
the greatest
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the great
 influence it could do. Needless to say, the financial investment a
business
 is capable of, is far higher than any other employer
could ever dreamt
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could ever dream
 of. In the contemporaneous world, taking India as an example,
india's
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India's
indias
Indias
 major wealth is possessed by few richer persons in the country.
Hence
 the
responsibility
 of
business
 is none other than wiping out the discriminations in the
society
 and help the poor to have a better lifestyle.
Secondly
,
one
 other
responsibility
 that
business
 has, is to act as a motivator or role model for the
society
. Reason being
,
Accept space
,
 many of the businesses
are try believing
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are trying, believing
are trying believing
try believing
 that it's their hard earned
money
Accept comma addition
money, hence
hence
 they should not waste it elsewhere. Bill gates being
on
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with
 the richest person that
world
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the world
 have ever seen has proved with his legacy that,
one
 who posses the money should not live for themselves but for others as well.
Hence
 he started contributing towards the
society
 and he started taking the lead to
welathen
being one more than ten
eleven
 the
society
 with all he could. That being said, people consider him as not just
one
 other richest person in the world, but as an
influencer
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
, motivator and a role model for the many. To recapitulate, I believe and agree that businesses
also
 have a
responsibility
 towards the
society
 and
in other words
 they have more
responsibility
 than the rest.

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