International tourism is now more common than ever before.Some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not.Discuss both views and state your opinion

With globalisation and cheaper flying costs, more people are now travelling International during vacation and public holidays. Many reckon that it is a welcoming phenomenon while others do not agree.

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essay, however

however

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agree with the idea of travelling abroad and we will discuss both the views in

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essay, followed by a seasoned conclusion. Modern world today is booming with advancements in technology and

global economy

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the global economy

;

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, high paid income and low

air fare

the fare charged for traveling by airplane

airfare

has raised

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have raised

the desire of how and where people want to

travel

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.

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of spending

holidays

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the holidays

somewhere around the

country

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vast majority

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the vast majority

of

public

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the public

now prefer

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now prefers

to

travel

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international countries. The major benefits of

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trend are economic and social benefits.

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is to say, tourists

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various countries become the economic drivers as local businesses and local markets flourish with more tourists coming to their

country

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, countries which promote tourism and welcome more international tourists is comparatively safer and convenient for people as government ensure

positive global image

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a positive global image

the positive global image

of their

country

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, despite low population and less opportunities for industrialisation, Jammu and Kashmir is

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most economically stable state in India because it witness around half million International tourist every year. During the public holidays, a large number of people

travel

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to a very few international countries, namely Switzerland, Thailand, Bangkok and Bali, which are highly promoted by all

travel

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agencies.

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, local residents become overwhelmed by the tourists coming in every day during

holidays

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the holidays

and

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disturb their livelihood and environment. In fact, countries and places which were once quiet and clean, turn around and become loud and

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due to international tourists, who are not aware of how the locals live.

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, international tourists dump 1 quintal of plastic bottles every year during their visit to Rajasthan, India. In conclusion, international tourism if on one

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hand, boosts

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economy

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economy, then

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on the other hand

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disturbs

the lifestyle of local people in that

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. In my opinion, government should be obliged to spend a proportion of

profit

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profits

from tourism on various campaigns and advertisements to make International tourists more aware about

locals

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the locals

and their needs.