International tourism is now more common than ever before.Some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not.Discuss both views and state your opinion

With globalisation and cheaper flying costs, more people are now travelling International during vacation and public holidays. Many reckon that it is a welcoming phenomenon while others do not agree.
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essay, however
however
agree with the idea of travelling abroad and we will discuss both the views in
this
essay, followed by a seasoned conclusion. Modern world today is booming with advancements in technology and
global economy
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the global economy
;
consequently
, high paid income and low
air fare
the fare charged for traveling by airplane
airfare
has raised
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have raised
the desire of how and where people want to
travel
.
Instead
of spending
holidays
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the holidays
somewhere around the
country
,
vast majority
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the vast majority
of
public
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the public
now prefer
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now prefers
to
travel
international countries. The major benefits of
this
trend are economic and social benefits.
This
is to say, tourists
in
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from
various countries become the economic drivers as local businesses and local markets flourish with more tourists coming to their
country
.
Moreover
, countries which promote tourism and welcome more international tourists is comparatively safer and convenient for people as government ensure
positive global image
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a positive global image
the positive global image
of their
country
.
For example
, despite low population and less opportunities for industrialisation, Jammu and Kashmir is
second
most economically stable state in India because it witness around half million International tourist every year. During the public holidays, a large number of people
travel
to a very few international countries, namely Switzerland, Thailand, Bangkok and Bali, which are highly promoted by all
travel
agencies.
As a result
, local residents become overwhelmed by the tourists coming in every day during
holidays
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the holidays
and
thus
disturb their livelihood and environment. In fact, countries and places which were once quiet and clean, turn around and become loud and
unhygienic
due to international tourists, who are not aware of how the locals live.
For instance
, international tourists dump 1 quintal of plastic bottles every year during their visit to Rajasthan, India. In conclusion, international tourism if on one
hand boost
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hand, boosts
hand boosts
a
country
's
economy
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economy, then
then
on the other hand
, it
disturb
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disturbs
the lifestyle of local people in that
country
. In my opinion, government should be obliged to spend a proportion of
profit
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profits
from tourism on various campaigns and advertisements to make International tourists more aware about
locals
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the locals
and their needs.

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