some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
A number of environmentalists and specialists are arguing on major environmental calamities. Some claim that the major problem of
extinction
of animal speciesCorrect article usage
the extinction
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is
this
century, while
others believe that there are more problems to be concerned of
. I reckon that losing Change preposition
about
animals
is considered a crisis that will lead us all to demise, however
the world must pay heed to other environmental crises. Advocates of the first opinion believe that the unbalance in Add a comma
however,
ecosystem
resulting from Correct article usage
the ecosystem
death
of Add an article
the death
a vast numbers
of Correct the article-noun agreement
a vast number
vast numbers
animals
will have lamentable consequences. With the vanishing of a kind of species, the proportions of others will be changed. For instance
, if a type of lions
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lion
disappeared
, its prey namely zebras will rise in number, resulting in Wrong verb form
disappears
overeating
of grass. Correct article usage
the overeating
This
will have drastic effects on the balance of nature, eventually affecting us negatively in different ways. On the other hand
, some scientists think that there are more important problems like global warming. Global warming affects us directly so the
scientists believe we have to put more effort Correct article usage
apply
in
finding a solution to it, Change preposition
into
instead
of wasting our energy in saving animals
. Although
both are considered vital, but
they demand that we have to think Remove the conjunction
apply
in
saving ourselves before saving plants or Change preposition
about
animals
. In addition
, some experts reckon that the efforts done to save wildlife are much as they believe that it is not a crisis yet. In conclusion, saving our ecosystem is a life saving
case. Whether by saving Add a hyphen
life-saving
animals
or finding solutions to worldwide ecological issues, man have
to put all Change the verb form
has
its
financial and physical efforts Correct pronoun usage
his
to prevent
Change preposition
into preventing
collapse
of our planet.Add an article
the collapse
a collapse
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