Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television news programs. Agree or disagree?

It is a well-known belief that nowadays, the news is lacking in connection with people's social life and it takes us overmuch hour to read a
newspaper
and view a news program on television. While I think it is true at
first
glance, I disagree with the view that all means of news will waste our day for reading or watching it. In one word, indeed, daily today has not strongly correlated with most people's life. The main argument supported
this
issue is that they are
spent
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spending
much time on producing which involves a certain range of steps namely investigating, typing, checking and printing. Specially, the process requires a long period to bring a complete piece of
newspaper
to readers.
Therefore
, not catching up with the latest news is considered as a common issue, but it can make the essential quality of them climb down dramatically. Another key reason which makes the information daily provided does not directly connect with their lives is that they contain different news’ aspects in the excessive way.
This
can make them too far away from ordinary people, which results in boredom when people use
newspaper
.
On the other hand
, I would hotly debate that paying
hour
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hourly
for a television news program is a negative way resulting in the time-wasting issue.
Firstly
, thanks
to
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for
the updated news on the Internet or TV set, we feel easy catching up with what is going on in our world
also
in our country.
For example
, by watching VTV channel, a national news channel in Vietnam, we know that around the world, there were more than 3,600 people cannot suffer from Coronavirus.
Secondly
, because the Internet is easy to be instantly accessed, we can look for much newest information in an excess of reliable sources.
Although
there is lots of fake news on the Internet, we can still believe in it, broaden our
mind
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minds
as well as increase knowledge in many aspects. In conclusion, while I support the view that reading the online
newspaper
and watching television news program are not time-wasting activities, I disagree that all means of news
are
introduces an alternative
or
lack of connection with our real file.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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