Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

There is a global issue related to environmental sustainability that emerge rapidly and endanger human basic needs. It is

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pollution

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, which becomes a critical threat

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global biodiversity, including existence of human being. In the following essay, I aim to identify several causes of

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contamination and their impacts to the nature and surrounding environments. Currently, chemical substances are widely used in almost every man-made product.

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highly usage generates

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huge volumes

a huge volume

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matters. Unfortunately,

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danger litters

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is not treated

comprehensively before discharging to the bumping area. Since most of the materials are liquid and released to

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,

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practice leads

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pollution

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. Another major contributing cause of

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damage is poor waste

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treatment. Both of domestics and

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factories, water

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drain are unsafe for the environment.

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, hazardous particles at food

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factory

factory's

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waste are clinically proven by a recent study.

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finding

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has never been revealed

before, and many food and snacks manufacturers are used to release their

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discharges to the river without any treatment to filter the

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prior to put them into the drain. All the addressed factors above put global

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supply at risk. Many environmentalists propose that

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pollution

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is one of the major factors of some marine species extinction, or at least decline in population significantly,

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a group of islands in the Pacific off South America; owned by Ecuador; known for unusual animal life

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fish in Mediterranean, Japanese sea-lion, and many others. An outbreak case of cholera in

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Southern

Tasmania reported

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decade was an immense fact of how danger

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pollution

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was. The local authority revealed that domestic

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sources were contaminated by untreated medical

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waste which released

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from

a private hospital in the area to the ground. To conclude, dozens of human activities are

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the main factor

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contamination that could harm the nature and the human themselves. Having said that, it is

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everyone's

responsibility to use

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wisely and keep our ecosystem green and zero-

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.