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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
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This
 table demonstrates the forest area in different Continents around the world between 1990 and 2005. In general,
According to
 the table
Ocenania
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Oceania
 has at least the forest area space compared with Africa, Asia, North
America
 and South
America
.
Firstly
, it is clearly evident that from 1990 to 2005 there was slight a decrease in the forestry field in Oceania from 199 to 197, South
America
 reach
to
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882 and Africa
changes
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 to 691.
Secondly
, it's clear that continental Europe has
been
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an increase
in
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 2000 to 2005 it is reaching
to
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1001 million
of
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hectares. Asia markedly rises in
a
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space from 570 to 584. South
America
 remains stable at 705 over five years. Asia Similar to Europe there
is went
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 up and
On the other hand
,
Afriaca
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Africa
 and North
America
 are a decreases

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