many people prefer to work in the same field for their whole life while some prefer to change the field of work. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays some people choose to work
in
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at
with
one company for years, while others feel better changing their working
field
briefly. In
this
essay I will discuss both positions, as each has its own reasons how different people could benefit.
Personally I
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Personally, I
support the latter view, as I am convinced that people could improve themselves more by changing the
field
of work from time to time. Proponents of constant working place are sure that in any account the importance of being constantly involved in the same process for many years be ignored. The main reason shown by them is the idea that one becomes an expert in his
field
only through years of work being deeply involved in all details. That seems
for
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to
many to be the only way to improve necessary skills needed for success.
Latest
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Later
The latest
research carried out by
government
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the government
showed that more than 45 percent of people feel themselves more confident while working in the same place for years because they have been learning their duties in details within working time. People, who support the opposite point of view, usually got used to improve themselves by learning the best practice from different working places. Not only seems
deep involving
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deep, involving
in details with
years
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the years
to be the best way of self-improvement as a professional, but
also
the
alternetive
one of a number of things from which only one can be chosen
alternative
alternatives
way is not less effective for many. Some skills, that are essential for keeping yourself up-to-
time
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time, for
for example
as a manager, could be nurtured only by changing your working
field
every three or four years. In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
case, as it was shown in the latest National University research, skilled professional stops in his
developping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
and
achieving
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achievement
of the high goals.
Although
people may vary in their opinions, as a manager, I am convinced that one could benefit more from working in different fields, as the working experience collected from several companies is the best approach for the most high aims.
However
, if you don't have
such
a high
goals
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goal
,
constant
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constantly
working in the same company for a life
also
seems to be an acceptable solution.
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