Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while other think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Now days peoples thinking watching tv is a bad habit for children, and some peoples
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think it's a good habit, I am angry and disagree some cases. For children watching tv is good and bad habit both, it's depend on watch how they are watched,
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knows which is a favourite and beneficial for us,
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point, because children are more busy with cartoons, play games, watching movies, cricket etc. And
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beneficial for children watching television like, news, technology, culture channel, historical movies etc. For conclusion, governments take against for channels banned for nude movies and unnecessary thinks stops, and
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for positively, we watch only for related study and over environment based channel.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary behavior
  • unrealistic perceptions
  • creative pursuits
  • social development
  • emotional development
  • constructive content
  • screen time
  • parental guidance
  • critical thinking
  • active learning
  • age-appropriate
  • media literacy
  • family bonding
  • moderation
  • perceive
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