Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while other think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Now days peoples thinking watching tv is a bad habit for children, and some peoples

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think it's a good habit, I am angry and disagree some cases. For children watching tv is good and bad habit both, it's depend on watch how they are watched,

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knows which is a favourite and beneficial for us,

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point, because children are more busy with cartoons, play games, watching movies, cricket etc. And

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beneficial for children watching television like, news, technology, culture channel, historical movies etc. For conclusion, governments take against for channels banned for nude movies and unnecessary thinks stops, and

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for positively, we watch only for related study and over environment based channel.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

122 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary behavior
unrealistic perceptions
creative pursuits
social development
emotional development
constructive content
screen time
parental guidance
critical thinking
active learning
age-appropriate
media literacy
family bonding
moderation
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