in many countries today insufficient respect is shown to old people. What do you think are the reasons? What problems might cause this in society?

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Nowadays, technology era is developed in many countries, but feeling of people has
dicreased
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
by
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from
the year.
For example
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,
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,
we start to
unrespect
look over carefully
inspect
our parents and relatives
,
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,
also
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lacking some senses. It might be
problem
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a problem
the problem
of our society. To prevent these cases in our life we must follow some "criteria of our society". So, what can be
reasons
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the reasons
for these situations? In my opinion essay I will try to find out some reasons and preventing solves of these occasions.
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of all, I already mentioned above in
Introduction part
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the Introduction part
of the essay that there is technology century and of course technology and
internet play vital role
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the internet play vital role
in the life of
human being
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human beings
a human being
rather than any kind of upbringing. Because, we stop to communicate each other face to face. We prefer any kind of social media to chat or to write
message
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messages
to each other without any emotions. We suffer from the lacking real emotions and feelings. It leads to the insufficient respect to adults. It
is undouptly issue
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adeptly issues
is adeptly issue
for our community. Because, without
upbringing our
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upbringing, our
growing generation can lose essential human factor like respect.
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,
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,
permissiveness
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permitted
in some
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
cultures
can lead to the lacking appreciation peoples.
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, freedom of
speach
the act of delivering a formal spoken communication to an audience
speech
and tolerance in some cases can affect that our teenagers can allow themselves to rudely communicate with adults.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social structures
  • nuclear families
  • extended family
  • intergenerational respect
  • dual-income households
  • technological advancements
  • perception
  • value shifts
  • vigor
  • innovation
  • increased mobility
  • neglected
  • mental health
  • generational divide
  • misunderstandings
  • stereotypes
  • social fabric
  • healthcare strain
  • inadequate care
  • quality of life
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