Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities. What problems are faced by the people living in big cities? What solutions can be taken to solve this problem?

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Cities are growing
on
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at
a fast pace, nowadays. It is generally seen that in the metros individuals face many hardships in their day to day life.
This
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essay highlights some of their issues that cause
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troubles along with some remedies.
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with the reasons,
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the cities are getting overcrowded because of the migration of people from rural areas. There are various big industries and Multi National Companies in cities which provide
jobs
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job
opportunities to people of both rural and urban areas,
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the construction of new buildings takes place out of the capacity. Eventually, the facilities’ demand increases.
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, Delhi is facing the situation of water crisis because of over population. People have to buy water there, for completing their
house hold
a social unit living together
household
tasks. Beside
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, income of people has
increased
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increased, thus
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, each and every member of the house have their private vehicle.
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, the emission of dangerous gases from them cause both air and noise pollution. Due to which, respiratory disease like,
asthama
respiratory disorder characterized by wheezing; usually of allergic origin
asthma
is spreading. Sounds from vehicles not only
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
hearing but
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hearing, but
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disturbs the
surroundings
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surrounding
.
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, the cost of living is relatively
high
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higher
in metros than the villages. The houses are very
costly but
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costly, but
people have to buy them because of their work, which in turn wastes their money on paying heavy amounts of interests of loans which they borrow to buy
house
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houses
.
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leads to mental stress. Even though there are some problems related to the big
cities but
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cities, but
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there are some steps which can be taken to improve the situation. On the
first
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hand, the government should open industries in the rural areas so that people can get jobs there and
thus
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the rate of migration will decrease.
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to
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the authorities should make plans to overcome the lack 0f facilities’ problem.
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, the taxes collected by them can be invested in the construction of roads and flyovers to solve the problem of road congestion. To sum up, the poor planning and centralization of jobs are
common reason
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common reasons
for the current
situation but
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situation, but
by applying a few remedies the problem can overcome.

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  • promoting tourism
  • boosting local economies
  • enhancing residents' quality of life
  • mental well-being
  • functional design
  • urban challenges
  • population density
  • transportation
  • housing
  • conflict between beauty and functionality
  • urban planning
  • aesthetic appeal
  • practicality
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