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In some societies, the number of crime committed by teenager is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment. To what extend do you agree?

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Owing to a problem which is a growing number of major crimes committed by teenagers, some people think that the key to solving
this
 issue is to have
same
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the same punishment
punishment
 as adults. In my opinion, I completely agree that
this
 is the best way to tackle the issue of high
crime
 rates in adolescence. With regards to the
punishment
, the government should treat every criminal in a same way, regardless of their age
,
Accept space
,
and should not give any different treatment because of their young age.
For example
, In some countries the capital
punishment
 for rape is
death sentence
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a death sentence
, if
this
 brutal
crime
 is committed by any
teenagers they
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teenagers, they
 should get the same
punishment
 of death sentence, since the sincerity of the
crime
 is same. Another point to consider is
that having same
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having that same
punishment
 for everyone will probably set an example for others. Nowadays, it has become a trend in
younger generation
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the younger generation
 to follow each other and they commit minor crimes any get away with it because of
these
denotes a person or thing
this
thay
people in general
they
that
 have become more resilient and do not think twice before committing any major
crime
 like murder. By sentencing them with
same
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the same punishment
punishment
 as adults for these major crimes would probably
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
 fear in others and they would think twice before
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
 any
crime
. In conclusion, to deal with an increasing
crime
 rate in teenagers, the government should implement some strict rules and punish everyone with same
punishment
 is the most effective way to decrease teenage
crime
.
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