The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in our society and how can the problem be solved?

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In today's world overweight is the biggest health concern, especially among the children. And, obesity is the reason behind many life threatening conditions in the majority of people around the world. I am going to explain the possible reason and what we can do to solve these reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
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and foremost cause of obesity is the sedentary lifestyle of human beings.
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, due to the advancement of technology people prefer to sit in front of their computer to do everything.
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, most of the software engineers who
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for the big companies, or who are in senior positions prefer to
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from home
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of going to the offices physically.
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, people are sitting in one position for eight to nine hours straight with minimal or no physical activities end up being obese at suffer through some major health issues like heart diseases, high blood pressure and cholesterol.
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, the majority of youngsters are overweight, because the internet has replaced the outdoor games with the virtual games. To tackle these problems, as humans, it is our duty to take care of our body.
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, if people prefer to
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from home, we can encourage them to go to the gym or do workout either in the morning before
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or evening after
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tell them to eat small frequent balanced meals. So, that they cannot go overnight and lives a healthy life.
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, for youngsters we can encourage them to play outdoor games like basketball, football.
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, they will going to have a healthy future ahead. To sum up, we have to treat our bodies as temples. Just like books are food for our brains,
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a balanced diet and good amount of workout keeps are bodies fit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • genetics
  • nutritional awareness
  • processed foods
  • fast food
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative measures
  • tax incentives
  • urban planning
  • community gardens
  • wellness initiatives
  • dietary guidelines
  • physical fitness
  • calorie-dense
  • portion control
  • metabolic rate
  • health literacy
  • food deserts
  • work-life balance
  • junk food
  • BMI (Body Mass Index)
  • non-communicable diseases
  • food labeling
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