“Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion”

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Nowadays, there are many kinds of sports playing in world,

however

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, few of them are really dangerous to play and due to

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reason some people believe that, the government should ban, but others claim that, nobody should

interfere people’s

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interfere with people’s

interfere in people’s

life. In

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essay, I am going to demonstrate

pros

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the pros

and cons of

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phenomenon On the one hand, supporters of

idea severely

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required that, the government must

imposed

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impose

bans and restricted to dangerous sports.

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, playing these extreme sports can cause some serious injuries and

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could lead to death. More specifically, games

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as boxing, racing, and others could be very dangerous since they are extremely risky and due to the a single mistake, brain cells of competitors could be damaged and they can live crippled in their rest of life.

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, in some cases, spectators can

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be injured in

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type of competition.

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: 2 years ago, in the Monaco grand prix a race car brakes and due to the

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accident car crushed with spectators.

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, no one could interfere people’s private life since everybody can decide for themselves whether to take part in a number of dangerous non-sport activities. Due to the human nature, mankind

always have

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always has

has always had

an inclination

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for

doing prohibited things and it

is nearly impossible deter

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is nearly impossible deterring

is nearly impossible deterred

has nearly impossible deterred

deters nearly impossible

is nearly impossible to deter

is nearly impossible deter

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, in

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century, due to the advancements of technology, dangerous activities are more safe, in comparison with past because so many equipment are available for providing people with security. In my opinion, I reckon that

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many risks have been anticipated but there are more advantages when the government let people practice what they like

Thu Mar 12 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

278 words

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“Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion”

Fully explain your ideas

Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people have health problems because they chose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What are the reasons and solutions?

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people's attention to art? The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.