Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative form of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous.to what extent do you agree with this statement.

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Nowadays various medicines are being replaced by other medicines in the daily life of people.It is believed that they are not efficient and to some extent they are dangerous too.I partially agree with

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statement.

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essay will discuss about both views of the statement.

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Firstly it

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Firstly, it

is believed that with the development of science and technology people are taking advantages of different medicines and diagnostic techniques.

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instance different

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instance, different

diseases like gastritis, fistula

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fissure and so on are relieved from

ayurvedic

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Ayurvedic

medicines.

people

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People

equally believe

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acupuncture for pain

medicine

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to a very great extent or degree

with the emerging varieties of

medicine

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people people have

choice

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the choice

a choice

to use it and most of them are being cured too. Whereas there are many negative impacts of

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this medicine

these medicines

medicine

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for

the health of an individual too.Because they are not scientifically based.For illustration people are using reiki

medicine

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in Nepal but it is not proved to be useful for disease by the science.The government of Nepal

distribute

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distributes

medicine

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in free of cost for controlling epidemic disease and every year number of people die because of their side effect.

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example

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example, last

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year there was a news article in hope magazine that 10% people had

serious side effect

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a serious side effect

serious side effects

because of

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medicine

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the medicine

. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

believe that alternative medicines should be used for curing

diseases but

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diseases, but

it should be proved to

be safe free

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be safe, free

from side effects.

people

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People

should be more conscious for using it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

229 words

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative form of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous.to what extent do you agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.’

many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other part of lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? how to overcome it?

In some countries, owning a home rather than rent is important for people. Why is this the case?　Do you think that this is a positive or negative situation?