Everybody should expect to have more than one career these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present day society, People
stress
Suggestion
are stressing
with their living cost,
hence
they try to obtain the top class job or several
careies
Suggestion
care is
care ies
care use
. They have to spend money to needs of their family members and day to day requirements.
This
assay will analyse, does people want to find more than one career?
Firstly
, I would like to discuss, why people find more
careies
Suggestion
care is
care ies
. Always, the
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
world has competition for foods, security and
also
space, perhaps someone can find
oppertunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
to obtain all of these things, instance for the
docters
a licensed medical practitioner
doctors
, the teachers and the graduates but someone can not. Because, their ability, educational status and social status are not enough to obtain these things. They have poor jobs or they don'
t
have jobs. If someone has
job
Suggestion
a job
, he can'
t
get enough salary. Because of
this
people
Suggestion
person
try to find another career to get their chance.
Secondly
, I agree with
this
statment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
. Because everyone are not same. The high
calss
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
class
cases
callous
people can maintain their living cost
form
Suggestion
of
from
their
salary but
Accept comma addition
salary, but
poor ones can'
t
do
this
. Always they are seeking another
oppertunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
. I have lots of examples for
this
. The University students can'
t
depend on their family during the
undrgraduate
a university student who has not yet received a first degree
undergraduate
perios
an amount of time
period
periods
Paris
so they
looking
Suggestion
look
are looking
for the part time job
oppertunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
after their academic time period. In a conclusion, the above look illustrates reasons and my
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
about
requrements
required activity
requirements
requirement
of multi
careies
Suggestion
care is
care ies
care use
. My
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opening
is revealed by the above reasons,
however
if we can maintain the best educational status, we can handle
this
condition.

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