Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy to meet the increasing need. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Today world
,
Accept space
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when technology
go
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goes
in vast level and they invented new thing in
new world
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a new world
the new world
in
this
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essay we can discuss about nuclear
energy
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some people say that nuclear
energy
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is good for our need and one say that it is not good for
environment
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the environment
. When we can find
new thing
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new things
a new thing
or invention in
this
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world we can move to nuclear
energy
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rather than we can go
for
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to
other sources
.
Accept space
.
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first thing
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The first thing
First thing
we can see that if nuclear
energy
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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