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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

#people #face #communication
We want to talk about
communication
, the
first
 image that have been
appeared
Suggestion
appearing
 in our mind is that two people talking to each other
face
 to
face but
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face, but
 modern technology has revolutionized all
aspect
Suggestion
aspects
 of our lives and made written
communication
more easy
Suggestion
easier
 and today most of the people prefer to text each other
instead
 of talking. But still people find
face
 to
face
communication
 more powerful than written
communication
. Personally, I hold the view that
face
 to
face
communication
 has a vigorous impact in comparison with written
communication
. When it comes to merit of
face
 to
face
communication
, I should say that when you talk to a person
face
 to
face
 it is not just the word you use during the conversation but you express your feeling with your body language, your voice tone and even the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 of your skin and it is not the case with written
communication
 since sometimes words cannot represent your feeling.
For instance
, you cannot shout when you write for someone.
Furthermore
, it is irrefutable that modern internet-based
communication
 tools have made an opportunity for
written
Suggestion
writing
communication
 and people can easily talk and text each other
instead
 of
face
 to
face
communication but
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communication, but
this
 easy-access way have created a distance between human beings who are physically closer. I personally know a husband and wife who chat via cell phone when they are both inside the house. They have told me that sometimes they use Emojis to express their emotions for one another
instead
 of expressing their feeling
face
 to
face
.
Consequently
, not only can
face
 to
face
communication
 represent our feeling better but
also
 it can make people closer to each other and
Face
 to
face
communication
 is considered to be more powerful than written
communication
.

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