Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Dear Sir, I am writing to you about the prize that
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is being announced in the newspaper. And the ability for anyone to nominate anyone that he or she sees that the person is a good candidate.For that, I am going to recommend my relative for the award.
However
, my sister organizes workshops for children, teach them
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the subjects that challenge them. She is even paying
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her own money to help these students to help them in school equipment. And teach them in her own house!
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, she took an extra job just to cover the cost of these kids studies and needs.
Moreover
, I suggest that the prize should cover three things.
First
, the school should support my sister and let her run night classes.
Second
, The community should pay for the equipment and clothes needed for those who can't afford
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.
Third
, My sister should be
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for the effort she put to help
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young people. I wish that you consider my
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proposal
your
sinceraly
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sincerely
shahd
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shahid
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shah
mohammed
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Mohammed
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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