Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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A great amount of trash is b

een

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being

roducing

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produced

by population in the current world.

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reality can explain for a lack of a

ware

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awareness

about the care of p

lanet

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the planet

and for the future generations.

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, the authorities still are on time for decrease the rubbish in the Earth, perhaps a solution could be to create laws in order to enhance the e

nviroment.

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

In my opinion, the increase of rubbish in the world is a consequence of selfish of human, due to people in general think about t

heyself.

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Actually, only a little group of persons is worried about whether a can of tuna will be e

liminate

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eliminated

totally for the land in 5000 years more.

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, nowadays companies create their product with a

lot

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of i

nnecessary

not necessary

unnecessary

necessary

plastic.

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, when we go to the supermarket, we can find a

lot

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of things that don’t need to be c

over

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covered

such

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as: vegetables or fruits.

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, in the

last

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years, Chilean government, for

instead

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, have done something for e

ncourage

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encouraging

the r

ecicly.

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One of these actions was the elimination of plastic bags in retail stores, so the c

hileans

of or relating to or characteristic of Chile or its people

Chileans

silence

columns

now is using their own bags. But I think a

uthorities

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the authorities

have to do more actions f

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since

we have a planet more “Green”.

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, I believe the State should generate laws for e

nhance

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enhancing

enhanced

responsibilities in r

ecicly

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for companies. In conclusion, is not a secret that we had produced a

lot

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of i

nnecessary

not necessary

unnecessary

necessary

unnecessarily

trash,

such

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a consequence of our a

nware

(often followed by 'of') not aware

unaware

about

this

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topic.

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, g

overnment

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the government

ave doing

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is doing

was doing

has been doing

some actions f

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help to reduce

this

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roblema,

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problem

but still there are a

lot

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for doing, because h

ave

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having

a better planet is a r

esposibility

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

of everybody.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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274 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumerism
disposable culture
over-packaging
non-recyclable
public awareness
waste management
environmental impact
recycle
recycling facilities
waste separation
single-use products
infrastructure

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