The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011

The bar graph presents the

quantity

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number

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of rentals and sales

in

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of

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various

kind

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kinds

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of film annually.

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, the chart shows the information

cleerly

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clearly

between 2002 and 2011. As can be seen, the number of

rental

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rentals

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started at the highest number at 175,000 units in 2002.

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, the consumer who

prefer

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to rent decrease slightly every year.

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, in 2011, the store got income from rentals

less

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than

2002

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in 2002

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4 times.

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, in 2002 people started to buy

DVD

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DVDs

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, which began at 40,000 units per year. Increasing rapidly,

demand

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of

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DVD

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DVDs

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reached

the

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peak in 2007, which was more valuable than every kind of

films

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film

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.

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, the number of people

favoring

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DVD

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DVDs

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decreased slightly from 2008 to 2011.

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, having the identical pattern with the rentals, VHS started with smaller at the beginning of the figure, which was 70,000 units.

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, VHS sales disappeared after 2005.

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, customers began to

interested

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in Blu-ray

film

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films

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in 2007 and

increase

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slightly every year.