It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, there
is
Suggestion
are
a considerable number of
new-born
recently born
newborn
babies having talent in art or sport.
Therefore
, they can easily become successful in
this
field, so it is believed that only people having natural talent can success in
gifted field
Suggestion
the gifted field
. But others considered that it is not necessary to have aptitude
first
if a person wants to become an artist or
sportsman
Suggestion
a sportsman
.
This
essay will discuss two opinions from my own point of view. If a child has a natural ability, he must be really lucky because of having a huge advantage in his entire life. He only needs to practice as
many
Suggestion
much
as possible to maintain that
flair
. When the
flair
is proficient enough, he will have opportunities to perform his best, and get success easily.
However
, gifted children and people have to face with certain problems, one of the problems is the scrutiny of society to them. Everyone will comment and talk about those aptitudes, even will deride cruel if the loss of unusual ability happens.
On the contrary
, a child without natural
flair
is still able to be a well-known artist or athlete if he finds his suitable vocation. When he knows what his aspiration is, he will have motivation to join a train despite the harshness of training is. The only difference between successful people with and without talent is, non-talented people have to train much harder than the gifted people. I have a brother who is excellent at chess, and he has participated in a lot of chess competition and always be recognized as the best player with many prizes. These medals are the result of his passion and gaining experience, not from
flair
someone who flees from an uncongenial situation
fleer
. So, I believe that if my brother still keeps himself training harder, he will get more big achievements in the future. In conclusion, everyone has
chance
Suggestion
a chance
the chance
to be a good artist or athlete, both talented and non-talented people. It is true that passion and dedication are the most important factors to become success in gifted field
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  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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