in some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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"Curfew" is a law enacted, limiting the public to go out of their houses. And there are some areas, where teenagers are not allowed to go out at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult. In my opinion, I agree with the statement, on following reasons.

To begin

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with, there are places, which are not safer for young children to be,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

at night. Most of these are with high rate of criminal offences.

Thus

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, the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

see

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sees

not letting youngsters out after dark, as one mechanism to protect them.

For instance

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, there

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are

a variety of people, who wish to make

teenages

any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)

things

their ultimate target. One group is the drug dealers, who easily target young children to get on with their business.

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, the local gangs

also

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keep an eye on them, trying to get them involved in their activities. The reason behind is, that teenagers being

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the age where they always try to explore and do new adventures.

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, they have become,

voulnerale

susceptible to attack

vulnerable

and easy target for many criminal heads. Moving forward, the compulsory rule of going out with an adult, has made them safer, because there is protection.

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adults are more experienced, and have a thorough knowledge

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society situations. They get the feeling when something bad is going to happen and they can always realize from the changes around them.

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, the are clear on what they communicate and act

professionaly

in a professional manner

professionally

professional

professionals

when dealing with others, where as teenagers might lack most of the qualities.

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, having an adult with them at night when they go out, will surely protect them from any harm. To conclude, I firmly believe, the imposes 'curfew' is a good decision made by

authorities

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the authorities

for the protection of teenagers.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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In a nutshell
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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292 words

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in some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

Include an introduction and conclusion

People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM food. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this

In the countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people by imported food?What could be done to encourage people to buy local food.