The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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japanese

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Japanese

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tourists were moving outside the country by

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roughly

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numbers in million,

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the average of

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Australia's

trade was changing by percentage between 1985 and 1995. A glance at the two

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informations

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reveal

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that both

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values increased

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with a

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coherence

in the decade.

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,

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begining

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beginning

of the 85th,the first

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illustrates that over four

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million

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moved

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apply

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abroad. Following

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five years, the capacity

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for

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travelling was growth

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to

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nearly 11

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.

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the nineteens, the bars fluctuated slightly down and up between ten and twelve million

tourist

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tourists

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until 1993. In the

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two years, the population reached almost 16

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millions

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illustrate

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the

percentange

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percentage

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the tourist

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market

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of the

japanese

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steadly

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steadily

increased until 1988 from the onset. After that, a tiny percentage of

downsized

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market

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was growth

steadly

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steadily

to over six

percen

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per cent

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the

market

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reached six

percent

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per cent

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between 1994 and 1995. To

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sum, both

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graph

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showed the same growth,

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, some points

was

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not matched

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according

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to be

rising

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a rising

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trend between 1988 and 1992.

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there is

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no doubt that

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australia's

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share

market

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link to

number

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a number

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of

japanese

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Japanese

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tourist

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tourists

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