There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Humankind invented the most

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extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier

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form of art

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music

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music

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Music

has been considered as the most diverse and simple kind of art, which include your own voice

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art

the products of human creativity; works of art collectively

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are mostly disected

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is mostly dissected

are mostly dissected

are mostly bisected

are mostly directed

into two categories

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Traditional and international one.

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Although

some argue that global form of

music

are more vital than the classical one

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will argue that original country

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is

better

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and give evidence of our dependence on

music

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Indigenousity

of traditional musical instrument are essential for a nation. These

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instruments

provide a sense of

proudness

for certain civilians

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because it gave them a sense of purpose to proud about to

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

nations.

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is crucial, especially for a nation who lost their pride due to poverty, lack of monuments, and origins

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one of the four countries that make up the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland; located on the northern part of the island of Great Britain; famous for bagpipes and plaids and kilts

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university cites that their civilians are proudly present their pride to

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the international community

about their country

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furthermore

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also

triggers the action of patriotism.

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From

the history, we could learn that

music

repeatedly generate

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repeatedly generates

the movement of people, because

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the music

could affect how we behave

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in

local society.

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war of Netherland shows

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excellent evidence of it.

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Thus

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believe that original

music

that belongs to a country provide more positive impacts rather than international

music

. Our mood

are often determined

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is often determined

by Musical instrument

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Music

is known to provide mental and psychological support toward those who listen to it.

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By

solely listening onto a certain concert, it could turn our laugh into tears in a matter of

second

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However

, most of us purposely utilize use it to calm our mind and focus

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on

a certain subject.

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study that was published by Cambridge university stated that Musics are basically the

soundwave

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sound wave

that control our brain

unconciously

without awareness

unconsciously

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Therefore

, we must aware that whatever video that we are listening at are possibly could cause

detrimental impact

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a detrimental impact

detrimental impacts

to our mind. In conclusion, Despite the Influence of Pop culture

music

in the current century,

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still firmly believe that traditional

music

carry

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carries

More positive impact rather than pop

music

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And

although

music

probably could control our mind, most of them are

advantegous

giving an advantage

advantageous

towards of psychological state and daily action.