The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
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vehicles
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stolen in four different countries, namely: Great Britain, Unnecessary verb
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Sweden
, France
and Canada
between 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, it is clear that
Great Britain had the highest amount
of car
theft
during the given period diagram. Sweden
was the second
nation with the amount
of car
theft
, the following countries were Canada
and France
, respectively in 1990; however
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the development
amount
of car
theft
in Sweden
did not change, the quantity of car
theft
in France
and Canada
was the same in 1999.
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Sweden
was the second
country to the amount
of car
theft
, it rose gradually from about 8 per 1000 vehicles
to about 12 per 1000 vehicles
from 1990 to 1996; subsequently
, by 1999 it continued to grow slightly to 14 per 1000 vehicles
.
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Canada
was 7 per 1000 vehicles
, compared to approximately 6 per 1000 vehicles
of
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in
France
. By 1993, there was a slow decrease in the amount
of car
theft
in Canada
by 2 per 1000 vehicles
, then
it climbed slowly from 5 per 1000 vehicles
to 6 per 1000 vehicles
between 1993 to 1999.
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stolen
car
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nevertheless
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description
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cars
France
also
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last
place with the figure did not change to 6 per 1000 vehicles
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