The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
The line graph illustrates the amounts of other
vehicles
are
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stolen in four different countries, namely: Great Britain,
Sweden
,
France
and
Canada
between 1990 to 1999.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Great Britain had the highest
amount
of
car
theft
during the given period diagram.
Sweden
was the
second
nation with the
amount
of
car
theft
, the following countries were
Canada
and
France
, respectively in 1990;
however
, over
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period the
amount
of
car
theft
in
Sweden
did not change, the quantity of
car
theft
in
France
and
Canada
was the same in 1999.
At
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the beginning,
Sweden
was the
second
country to the
amount
of
car
theft
, it rose gradually from about 8 per 1000
vehicles
to about 12 per 1000
vehicles
from 1990 to 1996;
subsequently
, by 1999 it continued to grow slightly to 14 per 1000
vehicles
. In 1990, the
amount
of
stealing
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car
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in
Canada
was 7 per 1000
vehicles
, compared to approximately 6 per 1000
vehicles
of
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France
. By 1993, there was a slow decrease in the
amount
of
car
theft
in
Canada
by 2 per 1000
vehicles
,
then
it climbed slowly from 5 per 1000
vehicles
to 6 per 1000
vehicles
between 1993 to 1999. Over a night
year
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between 1990 to 1999, there was a fluctuation in the quantity of
stealing
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car
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cars
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in Great Britain over years;
nevertheless
, it was still a top nation in the
amount
of
car
theft
in
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during
description
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period. At the same time, the
amount
of
stealing
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car
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cars
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in
France
also
fluctuated, but it remained
at
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the
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last
place with the figure did not change to 6 per 1000
vehicles
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, sweden, france, canada, amount, car, theft with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.

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