More and more adults are spending time playing computer games. Why are adults doing so? Is it good or bad?

Nowdays

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Nowadays

, video games are

becoming favourite

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becoming a favourite

part of

developed

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developmental

people.

it

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It

is shown in the recent study that 70% of

mature population

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the mature population

spend

time

on these games. It is good to play games until it does not become an

addiction

. There are many reasons that people spend

time

on playing games.

This

is true that it acts as

stress buster

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a stress buster

stress busters

. With the hectic schedule of

dailiy

every day; without missing a day

daily

living like job,

responsbilities

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

and demands of family people feel

stressfull

extremely irritating to the nerves

stressful

.

Thus

, playing video games relaxes their

mind

from stress.

Also

,

human

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the human mind

mind

become

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becomes

bore from the same routine of living.

Thus

, games help them to divert their

mind

from

boredum

the feeling of being bored by something tedious

boredom

and stop causing stress fir their

mind

.

However

, an

addiction

of computer games can cause more problems for themselves and for their families.

Firstly

, it affects to pay concentration on their work

thus

this

furthur

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

leads to other problems like termination from job and family problems. Loved ones will get upset and unhappy when the family member is spending most of the

time

on games

instead

of giving

time

to them.

Secondly

, the main problem is Health problem. People can get neck pain, dry eyes, headache and more problems by spending more

time

on screen. If a person already lost his job just because of

this

addiction

Accept comma addition

addiction, then

then

it will become hard for them to get health care. To sum up, video game

addiction

is just not a

problems

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problem

of

adults but

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adults, but

also

bad for teenagers. These games are isolating people from their families and from

responsbilities

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

. Mainly, it puts a bad effect on their

living

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lives

.