Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discus both these views and give your own opinion.
That well-known sportsmen should win a bigger salary than people with a different career stirs arguments. Some totally support
this
, whereras
some think sportsmen’s contribution isn’t enough to ensure on the other hand
whereas
such
a big money. I think only the true contributor to the society can be well paid.
The reason why some people support this
argument is that the sportsmen win reputation
for their country and sacrifice their private life. Once they can shine out on the international sports field, Suggestion
a reputation
such
as Olympic Games
, they will bring their country power and fame. Suggestion
the Olympic Games
For example
, Deng Yaping the champion of table tennis in row
, attracts people overseas to China to learn how to play tennis better. Suggestion
a row
Also
, some athletes devote their time on advertising sports ads. Famous brand, such
as Nike hire
super sports stars to advocate their brands worldwide, which is a wise way to increase sale and reputation.
Suggestion
hires
On the other hand
, people from other field contributing far more than sportsmen don’t enjoy a decent salary. For example
, teachers impart knowledge, shape children’s personality and foster their creativity; doctors work around the clock to save precious lives, fight
against disease and care for the helpless. Unfortunately, they are often being thrown behind our minds after their contribution. In China, teachers earn a lot less than sportsmen, especially those teach in the rural area.
In short, the huge pay gap in the salaries of sportsmen and people with other Suggestion
the fight
differnt
careers is neither fair or balancedunlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
,
which needs the government to work out efficient policies to narrow. I call on the government to take immediate action to seek the balance in society.Accept space
,
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- thirdly
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- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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