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The diagram illustrates the growth of a dragonfly from the beginning to the end of its

life

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cycle. Overall, it goes through several stages from an egg in the

water

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to a mature dragonfly in the air. The

life

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cycle of the dragonfly begins in the summer.

First

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, the eggs are laid under the

water

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. After one week, the eggs hatch and nymphs come out. Throughout the fall and winter, the dragonfly nymph lives under the

water

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. It eats and grows during

this

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time. In the spring, the nymph leaves the

water

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by crawling up a plant.

Then

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, it

molts

reduce or cause to be reduced from a solid to a liquid state, usually by heating

melts

to become an adult dragonfly. During the summer, the dragonfly flies in the air. It hunts and eats flying insects. It lives like

this

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for a few weeks or months and

then

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, its

life

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is over. The

life

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cycle of the dragonfly takes about one year to complete

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

148 words

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