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The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown leisure activities of Australian children

The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown leisure activities of Australian children
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The graph shows the preferred leisure activities of Australian children aged 5-14. As might be expected, it is clear from the data that sedentary pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones. Of the 10,000 children that were interviewed, all the
boys
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 and
girls
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 stated that they enjoyed watching TV or videos in their spare time.
In addition
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, the
second
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 most popular activity, attracting 80% of
boys
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 and 60% of
girls
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, was playing electronic or computer games.
While
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girls
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 rated activities
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 as art and craft highly just under 60% stated that they enjoyed these in their spare time only 35% of
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 opted for creative pastimes. Bike riding,
on the other hand
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, was almost as popular as electronic games among-est
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 and, perhaps surprisingly, almost 60% of
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 said that they enjoyed
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 too. Skateboarding was relatively less popular among-est both
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 and
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,
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 it still attracted 35% of
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 and 25% of
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.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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