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Some people think that instead of preventing the climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 is one of the most alarming issues throughout the world. People had started thinking that
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 of preventing the
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, it's high
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 to find a way to live with it. I here agree with the fact that there is not
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 in still taking preventive actions. We
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 start to face it and overcome it in day to day life One key point is that preventing is something which needs to be done before something occurs, but we are at the stage where it had already crossed the limit. There are many who campaigns for changing our lifestyle which will help out with
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. For an example, people are asked to switch from fuel to electric vehicles. But
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 it is not going to make any
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 that easily, in sometime resources to get electricity is
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 going to be difficult. Another is that, evolution is a natural process and we are being evolved since our existence to adapt for our survival. Many around the world work for
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 and fighting against it. But, is it worth making the effort as
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 is no way going to solve the problem.
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,
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 of wasting
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 and money to find a solution or to prevent the
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 which has already occurred. We should start living with it. As discussed above, without
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 waiting for a solution, it is high
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 for us to act on it and to align with the evolution happening around. There is no wrong in living the way it is. The future is anyway a question mark, which cannot be predicted.
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, we should start adapting and survive.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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