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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it seems that the popularity of pictorial methods which is used by people to keep in touch with others has been greater than writing.
This
 essay agrees with the idea that the image is more popular than
written word
Suggestion
the written word
. It will give the points in the below paragraphs.
First
, it is more convenient for people to
indentify
recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identify
 the meaning they want to show. If someone just write the sentences which are concentrated and small in a letter or a message, the receiver will have difficulty reading and understanding the main idea of it. Here is an example, a middle school student called Johnson, he wanted to introduce a new kind of hamburger to his classmate named Marry
,
Accept space
,
 though he described the appearance of it quite vividly and vividly, his classmate could not image the hamburger.
However
, another student
give
Suggestion
gives
 a photo of it to show it to the classmate, Marry recognized the mouth-watering food suddenly.
Second
, people will be awake when they see a
picture
 after reading an amount of words, it can improve the efficiency of them to remember the information. It is because that the brains of people work very hard when they concentrate
in
Suggestion
on
 the writing as dry as a chip and it can be very
tired
Suggestion
tiring
, if a
picture
 appears, it will revive abruptly.
For instance
, an office worker took his work seriously, his boss encouraged all the workers every day by sending a message with
a
Suggestion
an
 encouraging sentence. As time flowed, the officer got border. One day, he received a message sent by his boss, there was a
picture
 with a thumb
,
Accept space
,
it meant ”Good job!”.From
then
 on, the whole workers work efficiently. Overall, the effect of
picture
 applied
on
Suggestion
to
 people is greater than words. People can comprehend the meaning of others more easily
instead
 of thinking about it for a long time.
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