*The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute necessity for children* *To what extent do you agree or disagree?* Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

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the state of being or appearing to be actively engaged in an activity

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, and complexities of

modern world

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the modern world

has made mobile

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absolute necessary for children. I agree with the given statement which says mobile phone is not necessary for

teenager

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teenagers

the teenager

a teenager

. The

use

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of mobile phones has become necessary for children,

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however it

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however, its

however its

result

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to

distraction

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. Children tend to be more distracted with phone leading to lack of focus.

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example one

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example, one

of

distraction

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is playing games, the child

spend

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spends

more time with their phones which

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to

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of

lack of focus.

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Therefore it

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Therefore, it

is obvious that

complex

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the complex use

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of mobile phone by children causes

distraction

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.

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Further more

in addition

Furthermore

, the unrestrictive

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of mobile

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has made many children to grow

wide

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wider

in terms of technology and resulting

to

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in

poor academic performance in school. Studies

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have revealed

that most children spend more time with their mobile

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instead

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of their books. Due to the

use

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of internet the child

have

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has

access to many unsafe videos, which

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to stealing and lost of insight. So

therefore

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the

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of mobile phones has made many children

volnorable

susceptible to attack

vulnerable

to

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harm

and lack of focus in their studies which

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to

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of

in

low grade performance in their academics. Overall, the

use

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l of mobile

device

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should be restricted from children till they get

to certain

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a certain age

age, and

also

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to avoid

distraction

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and lost of insight