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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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The pie chart indicates the main cause of worldwide
land
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degradation
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 during the 1990s in the
percentage
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 scale, while the table
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illustrates
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the reasons
 of
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degradation
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 in three
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regions
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north
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North
 American
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 Europe and
oceania
a large group of islands in the south Pacific including Melanesia and Micronesia and Polynesia (and sometimes Australasia and the Malay Archipelago)
Oceania
. Overall, over-grazing is the main reason of worldwide
land
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degradation
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 and it reached 35%. Deforestation and over-cultivation has it reached 30% and 28
% respectively
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%, respectively
, leaving 7% for other reasons. It can be seen from the table that Europe had the biggest
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land
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degradation
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 which was 23%.
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The
 lowest
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 of
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 was in
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North
 America it reached 5%.In Europe deforestation had a
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bigger
big
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degradation
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, while in north America it has the lowest.
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In
 Oceania over-grazing had a highest point of
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degradation
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 it reached 11.3% and in
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North
 America the highest
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 of
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degradation
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 is over-cultivation that it reached 3.3%. In conclusion, over-grazing was the main cause of worldwide
degradation
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 in 1990s. Europe
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 of
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 was
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the largest
 of all three regions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • role models
  • moral values
  • social norms
  • structured environment
  • cooperation
  • respect
  • communal responsibilities
  • decision-making
  • societal integration
  • consistent messages
  • cultural expectations
  • complementary roles
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