Many believe that the best way to ensure a happier society is to reduce the difference in income earnings between the rich and poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The question

A question

of where happiness

are generated

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is generated

from in the modern society is hard to give a comprehensive answer. Some people think that if

huge

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the huge gap

a huge gap

gap

of

income

between wealthy and poor people is reduced, a whole

community

will be cheerful.

However

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

somewhat agree with

this

viewpoint that narrow

gap

of

income

difference would lead to

happy

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happier

people.

To begin

with, justice makes people feel happy and fair in the

community

.

if

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If

people are treated equally no depending on which social group they come from, how

wealthy they

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wealthy, they

are, they feel satisfied and relaxed with their living

community

.

For example

, in

job interview

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job interviews

a job interview

, candidates feel good if evaluation process focus on the what knowledge, skills and practice

they

objective case of they

them

acquire rather which clothes they wear.

Otherwise

, people, particularly youth, tend to lose their hope for

future

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the future

and feel desperate with their life.

Furthermore

, acquisition of

education

is the best way to create a happy society and get rid of a huge difference of

income

among individuals. It is a fact that high level of

education

lead to high

income

. When poor people are encouraged to gain

vocational

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a vocational education

education

to find a job, poverty rate will be decreased and

thus

the there will be no anger about earning

gap

among people.

Nevertheless

, it is true that the most influential factor that makes people feel dissatisfied within the

community

is the widening

gap

of

income

of advantaged and disadvantaged individuals. In the urban city, while some people are earning less than a dollar in the outskirts district and living under

impoverished line

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the impoverished line

,

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

are paid high by big corporations and staying in the penthouse.

For example

, my younger brother asks when their parents will become rich from parents, that have a serious impact on family relations and lead to disappointment at home. In the conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am strongly convinced that there are other better approach for leading happy society

by

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of

education

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educating

educated

people and treating equally.

Therefore

, the

income

of poor will increase

and

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community and thus

and this community

thus

community

will become more relaxed.