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Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution do you agree ?

#climate #change #threat #planet #action #control #consumerism #pollution
With tremendous advancement in the field of
technology there
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technology, there
 are many side effects which are directly or indirectly harmful to our atmosphere. I partially agree towards the given statement that changes in climate
is
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are
 another threat to our living environment. Transactions taken by government sectors and actions neglected by them will be discussed proceeding with my inclination at the end. Conservation of environment from harmful products as well as other materialistic things
are
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is
 of
least importance
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less importance
 to the political bodies. Many industries are having proper sphere by releasing dangerous gases at late
night which
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night, which
 in results the breakage of
ozone layer
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the ozone layer
. Due to a rise of population there are are least facilities available to carry of heterogeneous activities like washing clothes, bathing, etc. More and more trees are cleared illegally to develop area without the assurance of Forest ministry.
Overall there
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Overall, there
 are many
such
 consequences resulting as global warming,
acidrain
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acid rain
, temperature changes which covers a person with numerous diseases. On the flip side of it many political leaders and government bodies are making efforts to clean the surrounding and enables us for a healthy lifestyle. Many automobile companies are manufacturing electronic vehicles due to which effect of air pollution will be decreased. There are many events taking place for planting new trees and maintaining them to improve the quality of oxygen in the atmosphere.
Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
 amount of prizes and awards are distributed to the schools and societies in terms of cleanliness. Open games are organised at different prime locations to create the awareness among the citizens.
school
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School
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 are taught to use dustbins to keep their waste in
classroom
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the classroom
a classroom
. A current trend develops a
bi
an account of the series of events making up a person's life
bio
bit
 application of wet and dry waste which in return is easier to manage and decompose. To recapitulate, citizens are solely responsible to conserve their surroundings by cleaning
,
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,
 either relying on the political leaders and government bodies they are covered with many important
task
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tasks
 in the routine life. In
fact we
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fact, we
 should influence the surrounding neighbours to manage their own waste and collect in required area which permits the
further
 process easier.

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