SOME Expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Foreign
language
plays a vital role in our day to day life.It not only adds a skill to our
profile but
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profile, but
also
groom the child's overall personality. A Child becomes much more confident. Nowadays, most of the International Schools have many exchange
student
opportunities that a
student
gets while studying.
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It's
one of the golden opportunity and with prior knowledge of foreign
language
,
child
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the child
a child
does not face any difficulty.
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The student
A student
should have a good communication
skills
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skill
and that comes with practice,
that is
why I strongly agree that foreign
language
should be taught to
student
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a student
students
the student
in primary
school
.
Language
is not a subject that could be memories, everything is achieved with hard-work and patience.It is not our mother tongue or our
first
language
, we need
time
to adapt any
language
,
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,
and it will not be
fulfill
completed to perfection
fulfilled
if we start learning
language
in secondary
school
.
Therefore
, the students learning from primary
school
will get more
time
and it will be more beneficial for them.
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At
From
the start, children are in
there
of them or themselves
their
learning phase, they grasp more and more things happening around them. If
foreign
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a foreign language
language
is taught in primary
stage
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stage, then
then
student
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the student
have
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has
a good hold
on
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of
that
language
. Because they are learning at
very early stage
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a very early stage
so there basics will be more clear and can have a strong foreign
language
communication skills in future. And as the result,
student
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the student
students
a student
won't be facing any difficulties because
there
of them or themselves
their
base will be strong.
Student
have so much pressure in secondary
school
related to academic studies, sports or career that they don't get
time
to think about other skills.And, due to
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these
students are not able to devote their
time
in
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the foreign language
a foreign language
foreign languages
language
as they already have many other priority stuff lined up. Whereas, when students are in primary
school
they don't have much mental pressure and can learn better.
However
, secondary
school
student
will face much problem than primary ones, since primary once have no mental pressure. There is no age for learning new things
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you can achieve anything at any point
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in
life but
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life, but
when it comes to
language
, learning it at
early stage
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an early stage
the early stage
is much more beneficial than learning it in later stages.
Therefore
, we should keep
foreign
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the foreign language
language
in primary
school
rather than secondary
school
.

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