Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

Many places around the world still hold prison as the major method to deal with illegalities,

however

,

education

is a solution that having a huge endorsement in society and many argue that

this

is the key

for

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to

crime

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the crime

. While bringing higher

education

for civilians seems to be more effective to traditional

way

, I may argue that

this

way

of solving

crime

would not be able to replace or be biased prison, and both of these ways should be well delicately combine

to

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for

the best.

To begin

with, there are various benefits exclusive

from

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of

providing

education

.

For instance

, heighten communities’ awareness into

crime

and its outcome; showing how it could deter the society as well as the criminal’s life could act like a bitter lesson to kill crimes from

roots

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the roots

.

This

certainly costs much less

compares

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compared

comparable

to imprisonment, which charges not only money for infrastructures and

courts

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the courts

, but

also

human lifetime. Another advantage which

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comes

along with lessons is that follow higher educational standard, life standard

would

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would also improve

would also be improved

also

be improve.

Hence

, more

jobs

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job

opportunities would be accessible to more people,

therefore

they are

unessecary

not necessary

unnecessary

to commit

crime

no more.

For example

,

theif

the act of taking something from someone unlawfully

theft

thief

and fraud would be significantly

decrease

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decreased

as the less and less people live in poverty.

However

,

on the other hand

, improve society’s intelligence standing alone is inadequate to solve

this

acute problem. Prison is defined as a punishment as well as the isolation of culprits to

cilvilizations

a society in an advanced state of social development (e.g., with complex legal and political and religious organizations)

civilizations

civilization

for their heinous

crime

. Many felonies

could not be solve

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could not solve

with

education

as they relate

with

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to

the convict’s abominable mental problems,

such

as

pedophile

an adult who is sexually attracted to children

paedophiles

or serial murder; and

therefore

the only

way

to keep innocent locals away from

crime

is to put them behind the bars.

In addition

,

prison

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prisons

the prison

could

also

act as

an

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a

deterrent against any attempt to commit

crime

, for it always appears as a terrible punishment. In conclusion, despite all the benefits brought from better

education

, imprisonment is an indisputable factor involves in control illegalities; and the only

way

for laws to

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

is to balance both methods.