Many people prefer talking about their likes and dislikes in public. to what extent do you agree with it?

There are a lot of things
I’m
interested in, and if I prioritize them, my family is at the top of my list. As a family man, I prefer to spend
time
with my wife and son. It’s enjoyable for me to see that they are happy and they have everything. They are the most valuable individuals in my life. Their welfare and prosperity a
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is
my number one purpose.
Besides
, they are totally dependent on me, so I love sharing may free
time
with them
instead
of hanging out with friends or t
raveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
alone. Among all sports,
I’m
a big fan of tennis. I
first
became interested in it when I was a college student in Kashan. My friends and I equipped a place on campus with tennis gear. After a short
time
, some other students liked it and we teamed up to play together. Interestingly, we even arranged some competitions and I won some of them. Nowadays, I can’t play it because there isn’t anyone to accompany me.
However
, I sometimes watch tennis matches on TV.
I’m
also
into cars. They are one of my biggest passions. There are several cutting edge vehicles in the world, but BMW X6 is the one I can never ignore. Unfortunately, it is too expensive and a few n
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numbers
of people can afford them. I was 27 years old when I
first
bought a car. I sometimes buy car magazines or search for them on the internet to improve my knowledge. I know most of the best cars manufactured by American, Korean, Italian and German companies. Fishing is an awesome leisure activity I like doing in my free
time
. I have all sorts of fishing gear, and I go fishing in spring or summer when the weather is nice. There are some dams and rivers in the west of Iran near my home town, and my friends and I go camping and fishing there.
I’m
still an amateur fisherman, but I love it because of the joy and relaxation it creates for me. If I can catch more fish by net than by fishing rod and hook. What a fantastic day we can have by fish barbecue or grilled fish near a river!
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