In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extend do you agree?

Throughout the world the amount of crimes committed by minors

are

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is

on a rise.

Hence

, many people think that teenagers who commit major crimes should receive

same punishment

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the same punishment

as adults.

However I

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However, I

disagree to

this

believe, as the

brain

of young adults

are not fully developed

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is not fully developed

and putting them in

adult

prison can have more negative impact on them. The

brain

of an adolescent is not fully grown.

Therefore

, it is difficult for them to understand the effect of their misconduct and

as a result

they act in wrong behaviour. Several research shows that

human

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human brains

the human brain

brain

are fully developed after the age of 25. Sentencing juveniles to

adult

prison will do extra damage to these youngsters. Keeping grownups and minors in same cell can lead to exchange of new criminal behaviour between both. Which results in teenagers learning new ways to get

involve

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involved

in crimes. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

disagree

to

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for

with

giving same sentences as

adult

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an adult

to juvenile, as the

brain

of minors are not progressive enough to understand their wrong doing and locking teenager with

adult

will have

more harmful influence

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a more harmful influence

on

youngster

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the youngster

youngsters

a youngster

.