The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

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about

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from a

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of hundred

respondents

asking about the

purpose

of their travel, the

second

chart provides information about their destinations of visits by main region. The

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was taken between 1994 and 1998 in both

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Overall

, it is

obviously

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that most of

respondents

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the respondents

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travel abroad

with

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a

holiday

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and

also

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to the countries of

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Western Europe during the period when the

survey

was held. In the first table graph, almost th

three quarters

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of

respondents

(15246) answered that the major reason for their travel was

holiday

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in 1994.

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main trend started to decrease from that year

untill

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next

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year by about 4

thousand

people and reached

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just above 15

thousand

. But

the

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following years, there was a slight increase in the

number

of

tourist

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with

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holiday

purpose

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, and

in

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the end year of the

survey

, the

number

reached

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above 20

thousand

. Despite the

holiday

purpose

, the reasons for business activity and visiting friends and families were more popular

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of reasons. In 1994, the travelled UK citizens with business and visiting relatives

purpose

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were just above (3155) and under 3

thousand

(2689), respectively.

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occured

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occurred

continually in the

number

of people who travelled

with

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these purposes mentioned above during the

next

years, and for business, the figure almost reached

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4

thousand

, and for visiting relatives, it

outweighted

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outweighed

3

thousand

. There was

also

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respondents

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whose travelling

purpose

was different, and the

number

of

these kind

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of people

was fluctuated

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along

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during the

survey

period.