Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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has greatly influenced a lot on how people form relationships as well as bond with one another in those relationships they build. These outcomes do seem wonderful for humanity, but we cannot ignore some of the drawbacks they bring. Forming a relationship used to be overwhelming for some people, especially when they were introverts or shy in front of others. But with the use of
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, they can simply make friends without having to go outside. Social media like Facebook allows us to search for friends who share similarities. In the past, international phone calls were expensive, so people struggled to keep in touch frequently with their family or friends. But now, with the use of
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, we can easily connect with each other despite long distances apart. Online applications
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as Facetime, Skype or Whatsapp are extremely helpful for supporting long-distance relationships with family and friends since they can deliver our text messages and make free phone calls even overseas. Being beneficial as it seems,
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has the ability of isolating others and reducing real interactions. The number of young people who are addicted to social media is increasing; they refuse to hang out or even meet face-to-face,
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means that these virtual friendships are
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poor substitutes of the real friendships.
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, since the rise of
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, more
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cases are frequently reported, which.
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known as bullying which takes place on the internet and may lead to depression, because people are able to remain anonymous
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having no known name or identity or known source
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themselves online, so finding their identities is already difficult. We all agree that
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has changed our ways of communicating with others. We get to make more friends and contact easily with to our family or friends overseas, but at the same time, some drawbacks like isolating people and increasing the number of
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cases all over the world which we must
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be careful of while using
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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