Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

is about designing machines that can think. Some take it as a blessing, whereas others take it as a curse. In the following paragraphs I shall discuss both viewpoints. I believe that machines turning more intelligent can be disastrous for the human race. There are many reasons why some people think that intelligent machines will be a boon for humanity.
, intelligent robots can be used where humans have limitations and find solutions to problems which have eluded human beings till now. To cite some examples intelligent machines could find cures for diseases like cancer, AIDS. They can hasten our development and progress to unimaginable levels. What we see in science-fiction movies can become a reality in no time, if true artificial
comes to life.
On the other hand
, those who say that the development of AI is negative, give their reasons as follows.
To begin
with, if intelligent machine-robots replace human being’s work
would cause many to go out of work. Already machines have replaced humans in
laborious and time-consuming work
a laborious and time-consuming work
, but if machines become more intelligent, they might make human beings redundant. Already an implication of
can be seen in the form of
, with the heavy application of artificial
, humans may become overly dependent on machines, losing their own mental capacities. I
hold the opinion that artificial
can be very detrimental for our race. I believe that
needs emotions
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needs, emotions
and temperance to be good and it is impossible for AI to have emotions. Without feelings, it is very hard to predict what kind of future would AI bring and though it seems far-fetched, the biggest fear is that intelligent machine might erase and wipe human beings
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the Earth. In conclusion, I believe it is highly possible that an advanced AI may create utopia – world without any problems, but it is
possible that it may lead human beings to their extinction.
, I am strongly opposed to the idea of human beings trying to create highly intelligent machines.

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